人教版七年級(jí)英語下冊(cè)同步作文
Unit 1 Animal Friends . (話題寫作指導(dǎo))
【話題分析】
動(dòng)物朋友
本單元的話題是“動(dòng)物朋友”。與此相關(guān)的寫作任務(wù)是介紹自己最喜歡的一種動(dòng)物。寫此類作文時(shí),可以從這種動(dòng)物的名稱、外貌特征以及自己喜歡的原因等方面介紹。寫作時(shí)常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
常用句型:
My favourite animal is......is my favouriteanimal.
I like/love...because...
It can...
It looks...
【寫作實(shí)例】
你曾經(jīng)去動(dòng)物園看過動(dòng)物嗎?請(qǐng)你介紹一下自己最喜歡的一種動(dòng)物。
要求:1.以“My Favourite Animal”為題,圍繞主題展開;
2.語句通順,表意貼切,無語法錯(cuò)誤;
3.不少于60詞。
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【思路點(diǎn)撥】
【教材典句】
1、The elephant is my favourite animal.(SB,1b)
2、I love elephants because they are strong and clever.(SB,1b)
3、They look after other elephants when they don’t feel well.(SB,1b)
【經(jīng)典范文】
My Favourite Animal
The panda is my favourite animal.Ilove pandas because they are nice andlovely. You can see them in many zoos inthe world. They are all from China. Theylike eating bamboo and they can eat 10kilos of bamboo a day. When we see them,they are always eating. Pandas are whiteand black and their eyes, ears and legs areblack. They look very smart. Many peoplelike them. Do you love pandas?
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
①用“..is my favourite animal.”點(diǎn)明自己最喜歡的動(dòng)物。
②用“I love.because...”說明自己喜歡的原因。
③用be from 介紹大熊貓來自哪里。
④用含有when的復(fù)合句,說明大熊貓愛吃東西的特點(diǎn)。
【同步檢測(cè)】
1.假設(shè)你是李華,你上周日去了動(dòng)物園。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容,介紹一下你在動(dòng)物園里所見到的有趣的動(dòng)物,并為你的同學(xué)們提供一些建議。
Interesting animals
elephants
big and strong, leaves and fruit
long-nosed monkeys
happy or excited, shake (抖動(dòng)) their noses, funny
giraffes
long necks, up to 6-8 meters tall
Advice (建議)
no photos don’t feed them
要求:
(1)短文須包含表格中所有提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;
(3)詞數(shù)60個(gè)左右(開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
Last Sunday, I visited the zoo. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Last Sunday, I visited the zoo. In the zoo, I saw many interesting animals. Elephants are big and strong. They like to eat leaves and fruit. The long-nosed monkeys have big noses. When they are happy or excited, they shake their noses. That’s funny. The giraffes have long necks. They can be up to 6-8 meters tall. I had a great time in the zoo.
When you come to the zoo, you shouldn’t take photos. It may scare the animals. And you mustn’t feed the animals, or they may get ill.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)”;
③提示:根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫作,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意要點(diǎn)齊全,無單詞拼寫及語法錯(cuò)誤。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,承接開頭,介紹在動(dòng)物園里見到的有趣的動(dòng)物;
第二步,提出參觀動(dòng)物園的一些建議。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①up to達(dá)到
②have a great time玩得開心
③take photos拍照
[高分句型]
When they are happy or excited, they shake their noses. (when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)
2.老虎是中國(guó)的國(guó)家一級(jí)保護(hù)動(dòng)物,深受人們喜愛。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中的信息寫一篇英語短文,把這只老虎介紹給你的好朋友。
Name
Huahua
Age
Five
Appearance (外表)
Orange with black stripes; big eyes; strong; majestic (雄偉的) and cool
Favorite food
Meat
Hobbies
Run and hunt
寫作要求:
1. 文中須包含表格中所提示的全部要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名或校名;
3. 詞數(shù)70個(gè)左右。
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【答案】
Huahua is a tiger. It is five years old. Huahua has an amazing appearance. Its fur is orange with black stripes. It has big eyes. Huahua looks very strong, majestic and cool. Its favorite food is meat. Huahua likes running and hunting. It is a precious animal that we should protect.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是材料作文;
②時(shí)態(tài):主要時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中所給信息,均要一一闡述,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
[寫作步驟]
第一步:開門見山直奔主題,開始介紹老虎花花。
第二步:按照所給表格信息對(duì)老虎花花的情況進(jìn)行介紹。
第三步:書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)應(yīng)保護(hù)老虎的呼吁。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①like doing喜歡做
[高分句型]
①It is a precious animal that we should protect. (定語從句)
3.學(xué)校正在開展“動(dòng)物保護(hù)月”系列活動(dòng),你校英語俱樂部以“My Favourite Animal”為題向同學(xué)們征稿。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括:
1. 它的外貌特點(diǎn)(體形大小、皮毛顏色、眼睛……);
2. 你喜愛它的原因(它可以幫助尋找東西、保護(hù)主人、陪伴……);
3. 你對(duì)人和動(dòng)物的關(guān)系的看法。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)為70左右;
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱;
4. 標(biāo)題和開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯:pointed(adj. 尖的),care for(照顧),loyal(adj. 忠誠的)
My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is dogs. I have a dog named Max. He is strong with brown fur, pointed ears and a small tail.
I love dogs because they are loyal. Max is always there for me. He sleeps in my room, plays with me, and protects me from danger. He can often help us find the things we want. With the help of my dog, everything in my family is fine.
Animals are our friends. We should care for them.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;
③ 提示:根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作,注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,介紹你最喜歡的動(dòng)物的外貌特點(diǎn);
第二步,表達(dá)你喜歡它的原因;
第三步,最后談?wù)勀銓?duì)人和動(dòng)物的關(guān)系的看法。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① play with和……玩
② protect sb from保護(hù)……免于……
③ with the help of在……幫助下
[高分句型]
I love dogs because they are loyal.(原因狀語從句)
4.假如你是Kevin,是學(xué)校動(dòng)物愛好者俱樂部的一名成員。城市動(dòng)物園新來了一只名叫卡卡的長(zhǎng)頸鹿,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文,向你們俱樂部的其他成員介紹一下這只長(zhǎng)頸鹿。
卡卡的信息
來自:非洲 年齡:6歲
身高:5米 食物:樹葉和胡蘿卜
生活習(xí)慣:一天睡兩個(gè)小時(shí),喜歡玩水,擅長(zhǎng)奔跑
注意:
(1)詞數(shù)60左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
(2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
(3)短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱。
提示詞:米 metre
Hello, everyone! My name is Kevin. There is a new member in our city zoo. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Hello, everyone! My name is Kevin. There is a new member in our city zoo. Its name is Kaka. It comes from Africa and it is six years old. It has a long neck and it is five metres tall. Leaves and carrots are its favourite food and they are very healthy. It only sleeps two hours a day and it really likes playing with water. It is also very good at running with its long legs. I’m sure you will like it very much. So, next time, let’s go to see it together!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中長(zhǎng)頸鹿卡卡的介紹要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,表明寫作意圖。借用“城市動(dòng)物園新來了一只名叫卡卡的長(zhǎng)頸鹿,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文,向你們俱樂部的其他成員介紹一下這只長(zhǎng)頸鹿。”來引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容;
第二步,具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“身高、食物、生活習(xí)慣等”幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹長(zhǎng)頸鹿卡卡的具體情況;
第三步,書寫結(jié)語。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①come from來自;
②like doing sth喜歡做某事;
③be good at擅長(zhǎng);
④let sb to do sth讓某人做某事。
[高分句型]
①There is a new member in our city zoo. (“there be”句型)
②It is also very good at running with its long legs. (動(dòng)名詞作賓語)
5.旅外大熊貓的“回家之旅”屢上熱搜,又一次提高了人們對(duì)大熊貓保護(hù)工作的關(guān)注。假如你和你的同桌正在參加學(xué)校舉辦的以“Giving Pandas a Good Life”為主題的英文手抄報(bào)評(píng)選活動(dòng)。你的同桌負(fù)責(zé)手抄報(bào)的繪制,而你負(fù)責(zé)文本的撰寫。請(qǐng)根據(jù)如下提示,完成一篇英語短文。
注意:
1. 短文必須包括所有要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名;
3. 詞數(shù) 60 左右;標(biāo)題和開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Giving Pandas a Good Life
What animal has 6 fingers and wears a black and white coat? Yes, it’s the panda!______________________
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【答案】
Giving Pandas a Good Life
What animal has 6 fingers and wears a black and white coat? Yes, it’s the panda! Pandas are cute and shy. They are also friendly to people. They like eating bamboo and sleeping.
It is known that pandas are endangered. Many people cut down lots of trees so they may have terrible living conditions. What’s more, they may die of illnesses easily because many of them are out of protection.
I hope the government can build more natural panda homes. Also, it is necessary that everyone should treat them as our friends and protect their homes.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中熊貓的個(gè)性、生活習(xí)慣、危險(xiǎn)以及保護(hù)措施等內(nèi)容,適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,表明寫作意圖。以猜謎語的形式開頭,并介紹熊貓的個(gè)性和生活習(xí)慣;
第二步,從熊貓的危險(xiǎn)及措施等方面具體介紹;
第三步,從保護(hù)措施方面,書寫結(jié)語,表達(dá)自己的感受,提出倡議。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① be friendly to sb. 對(duì)某人友好
② endangered瀕危的
③ cut down 砍伐,減少
④ die of 死于
[高分句型]
① Pandas are so popular because they are cute and shy. (because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)
② I hope the government can build more natural panda homes. (賓語從句)
【真題鏈接】
1.(22-23七年級(jí)下·甘肅隴南·期末)假如你是李華,你的朋友張蕓來信詢問你最喜歡的動(dòng)物,請(qǐng)你用英文給她寫一封來信,談?wù)勀阕钕矚g的動(dòng)物。
提示:
1. What kind of animals do you like?
2. Where are they from?
3. What are the animals like?
4. What do you think of them?
要求:
1. 參考提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2. 語句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整;
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 詞數(shù):不少于70詞。
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【答案】
Dear Zhang Yun,
I like animals very much and I can see many animals in my life. My favorite animals are pandas because they are very cute and nice. They come from Sichuan, China. They are black and white. They look fat and walk slowly. They like to eat bamboo. Most of the time, they’re eating. Pandas are the symbol of China. Now they are loved by people all over the world. I hope we all can protect pandas.
What’s your favorite animal? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文一封書信;
②時(shí)態(tài):應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)包括動(dòng)物的種類、來源、特性和個(gè)人對(duì)動(dòng)物的看法。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,表明寫作意圖??梢院?jiǎn)單介紹自己對(duì)動(dòng)物的喜愛,引出最喜歡的動(dòng)物;
第二步,具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從動(dòng)物的種類、來源、特性等方面詳細(xì)描述最喜歡的動(dòng)物;
第三步,書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)對(duì)動(dòng)物的喜愛和希望與朋友分享這份喜愛的愿望。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①cute可愛的
②symbol象征
③look forward to doing期待做某事
[高分句型]
①M(fèi)y favorite animals are pandas because they are very cute and nice. (because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)
②I hope we can all protect pandas. (I hope接賓語從句)
2.(23-24七年級(jí)下·貴州貴陽·期中)動(dòng)物與人類的生活息息相關(guān)。人類應(yīng)該關(guān)愛所有動(dòng)物,關(guān)注瀕危動(dòng)物。你最喜歡哪種動(dòng)物呢?請(qǐng)根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖的提示信息,以“My Favorite Animal”為題,用英語寫一篇短文介紹你最喜歡的小動(dòng)物。
寫作要求:
1. 須包含思維導(dǎo)圖的所有信息,可適當(dāng)拓展;
2. 不少于60詞;
3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)個(gè)人信息。
My Favorite Animal
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【答案】
My Favorite Animal
Of all the animals, I like pandas best.
Pandas mainly come from Sichuan and Gansu Province in China. They are black and white. They have two big eyes. They look like bears. They are quiet and peaceful. They eat bamboo shoots and leaves.
I like pandas because they are friendly to people. We should cut down less forests and get on well with animals to protect endangered animals.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;
③提示:材料所給信息不得遺漏,可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,點(diǎn)題說明自己最喜歡的動(dòng)物;
第二步,描寫熊貓的外形特征和習(xí)性;
第三步,寫出喜歡熊貓的原因,以及提出如何幫助動(dòng)物的建議。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①come from來自
②look like看起來像
③cut down減少;砍伐
④get on well with與……相處得好
[高分句型]
①I like pandas because they are friendly to people.(原因狀語從句)
②We should cut down less forests and get on well with animals to protect endangered animals.(動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語)
3.(23-24七年級(jí)上·內(nèi)蒙古鄂爾多斯·期末)我們的世界因各種生物而豐富多彩,妙趣橫生。它們是我們親愛的朋友,也是我們守護(hù)的珍寶。國(guó)寶大熊貓“花花”是熊貓屆的頂流女明星,深受人們的喜愛。請(qǐng)依據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容,寫一篇介紹大熊貓“花花”的英文稿。
姓名:花花 (Huahua)
年齡:3
出生地:四川成都
食物:竹子(bamboo)、蔬菜、水果
性格:聰明、友好
要求:
1. 字?jǐn)?shù)80左右,題目已給出,不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù);
2. 依據(jù)表格內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3.·文中不得出現(xiàn)反映考生信息的真實(shí)人名、學(xué)校等內(nèi)容。
Huahua
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Huahua
Huahua is a 3-year-old panda. She was born in Chengdu, Sichuan Province. She is very cute and popular. Huahua is very smart and friendly. Her favorite food is bamboo, vegetables and fruit. She lives in a zoo and has many fans. People like to watch her eat and play.
As a top celebrity in the panda world, she has captured the hearts of many people. Huahua is not just a national treasure but also a beloved friend to all. I hope she can live a happy life.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;
③提示:根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作,不能遺漏信息,以第三人稱為主。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,介紹了花花的基本信息,包括年齡、出生地和食物;
第二步,描述了花花的性格特點(diǎn);
第三步,最后強(qiáng)調(diào)了花花在熊貓界的明星地位和受歡迎程度。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①be born in出生于
②live in住在
③capture the hearts of俘獲人心
[高分句型]
①Huahua is not just a national treasure but also a beloved friend to all.(not just...but also)
②I hope she can live a happy life.(賓語從句)
4.(22-23七年級(jí)下·遼寧鞍山·期中)動(dòng)物是人類最好的伙伴,它們用自己的一生給人們帶來幫助與快樂。下面請(qǐng)你來介紹一下自己最喜歡的小動(dòng)物,并說說原因。
內(nèi)容提示:1. What animal do you like best?
2. Why do you like it?
要求:1.詞數(shù) 60-70;
2.書寫規(guī)范,意思連貫。
My Favourite Animal
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【答案】
My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is the panda. I love pandas because they are nice and lovely. You can see them in many zoos in the world. They all come from China. They like eating bamboo and they can eat 30 kilos of bamboo a day. When we see them, they are always eating. Pandas are white and black, and their eyes, ears and legs are black. They look very cute. Many people like them. Do you love pandas?
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇說明文,為材料作文;
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,直接點(diǎn)題說明自己最喜歡的動(dòng)物是什么;
第二步,介紹喜歡熊貓的原因以及熊貓的情況。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①come from來自
②like doing sth喜歡做某事
[高分句型]
①I love pandas because they are nice and lovely.(because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)
②When we see them, they are always eating.(when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句)
5.(22-23七年級(jí)上·遼寧大連·期末)假如你是Kevin,是學(xué)校動(dòng)物愛好者俱樂部的一名成員。動(dòng)物園新來了一只名叫卡卡的長(zhǎng)頸鹿,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文,向你們俱樂部的其他成員介紹一下這只長(zhǎng)頸鹿。
卡卡的信息來自:非洲 年齡:六歲
身高: 3米 食物:樹葉和胡蘿卜
生活習(xí)慣:一天睡兩個(gè)小時(shí),喜歡玩水,擅長(zhǎng)奔跑
寫作要求: (1)短文需包括所給的提示信息,可適當(dāng)拓展
(2) 條理清晰,語句通順,標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確,書寫規(guī)范。
(3)60詞左右,短文的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
提示詞匯:米 metre
Hello, everyone! My name is Kevin. There is a new member (成員) in our city zoo. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Hello, everyone! My name is Kevin. There is a new member (成員) in our city zoo. His name is Kaka. He comes from Africa and he is six years old. He has a long neck and he is three metres tall. Leaves and carrots are his favourite food and they are very healthy. He only sleeps two hours a day and he really likes playing with water. He is also very good at running with his long legs. I’m sure you will like it very much. So, next time, let’s go to see it together!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是材料作文;
②時(shí)態(tài):主要時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏圖表中“提示信息”的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)均要一一闡述,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
[寫作步驟]
第一步:表明寫作意圖。借用“我們城市的動(dòng)物園里有一只新成員”來引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容。
第二步:具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。依照提示信息的要點(diǎn)——來自國(guó)家、年齡、身高、食物、生活習(xí)慣均要一一闡述。
第三步:書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)“讓我們一起去看它”的愿望。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①a new member一名新成員
②comes from來自
③a long neck一個(gè)長(zhǎng)脖子
[高分句型]
①He is also very good at running with his long legs. (be good at的用法)
②I’m sure you will like it very much. (賓語從句)